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Ilona
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Post subject: Re: LEGENDS OF THE ELEMENTS- Fall of the SYN Posted: Wed Jun 08, 2011 12:26 am |
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Joined: Sun Mar 21, 2010 3:02 pm Posts: 1770 Gender: female
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yeah its okay .. Even if i don't like the subject "Fall of the SYN" not that much Find a neutral one and we decide after the war.
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DARKLIGHTER
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Post subject: Re: LEGENDS OF THE ELEMENTS- Fall of the SYN Posted: Wed Jun 08, 2011 12:42 am |
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Joined: Thu Jun 04, 2009 7:14 am Posts: 201 Location: Maldives Gender: male
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Ok got two more Chapters done.here it is.
CHAPTER 5 "I have had enough,stop Hitchhiker,you have been taking us in circles trying to climb this mountain.You should have used a net positioning holo instead of that old map of yours." Ewok complains as he put his small teddy hands on his friend. "Don't worry my little hairy friend,I learned hiking from the best academy there is" replies Hitchhiker as he looks over the broken map. "And where would that be" asks Ewok as he drank from his water-skin. "I used to go all the way up the stairs into the attic and back down into the basement and back up again,using the map my dad made me. I used compasses and other stuff" smiles Hitchhiker proudly at the dumbstruck little Ewok. "That explains everything"mutters Ewok as he inspect his XM5 rifle.
CHAPTER 6 Several hours later Ewok and Hitchhiker finally manages to climb up to the mountain top SYN base. The watch as two Reaper patrols march past their hiding place towards the huge base which loomed over them like a menacing figure. "How are we going to get past them" whispers Ewok to his silent companion."We fight them the old way" grins Hitchhiker as he readies his SR400.
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DARKLIGHTER
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Post subject: Re: LEGENDS OF THE ELEMENTS- Fall and rise of Heroes Posted: Wed Jun 08, 2011 12:50 am |
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Joined: Thu Jun 04, 2009 7:14 am Posts: 201 Location: Maldives Gender: male
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next up a fight between the SYN and WIND leader,stay tuned for the result.
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Post subject: Re: LEGENDS OF THE ELEMENTS- Fall and rise of Heroes Posted: Wed Jun 08, 2011 12:52 am |
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Haha. Epic indeed. Funny for both sides. For SYN the last 2 chapters. May as well right a book, i will buy it
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mfreak
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Post subject: Re: LEGENDS OF THE ELEMENTS- Fall and rise of Heroes Posted: Wed Jun 08, 2011 1:56 am |
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Joined: Wed Feb 10, 2010 2:21 am Posts: 2757 Location: Chicago, Illinois Gender: male
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Nice one!! Hey why dont you post a chapter where we take out Strawberry or something
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Post subject: Re: LEGENDS OF THE ELEMENTS- Fall and rise of Heroes Posted: Wed Jun 08, 2011 2:12 am |
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Joined: Wed Jul 28, 2010 5:38 am Posts: 2968 Location: Broome, Western Australia Gender: male
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Chapters are a little short but apart from that it's AWESOME! Great job!
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GUNSDONTKILLUIDO
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Post subject: Re: LEGENDS OF THE ELEMENTS- Fall and rise of Heroes Posted: Wed Jun 08, 2011 4:46 am |
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Joined: Tue Jan 25, 2011 2:10 pm Posts: 53 Location: Woonsocket Gender: male
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NICE story. Oh wait i was in that era! That was on mars right! I was kept being attacked by syn by king crimson!
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Jake
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Post subject: Re: LEGENDS OF THE ELEMENTS- Fall and rise of Heroes Posted: Wed Jun 08, 2011 6:03 am |
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Joined: Sat Dec 19, 2009 7:48 pm Posts: 2693 Gender: male
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Only had three minutes to post how I felt about this, thankyou for the epic story that is all -Ares oohhh yeah make more I wanna read this and I would totally buy it
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Post subject: Re: LEGENDS OF THE ELEMENTS- Fall and rise of Heroes Posted: Wed Jun 08, 2011 6:06 am |
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GUNSDONTKILLUIDO
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Post subject: Re: LEGENDS OF THE ELEMENTS- Fall and rise of Heroes Posted: Wed Jun 08, 2011 6:22 am |
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Joined: Tue Jan 25, 2011 2:10 pm Posts: 53 Location: Woonsocket Gender: male
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U should get that published then sell it to battledawn!
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